Okay this is the entire pages layout, I think this will be easier to follow in general. Also easier to update. Let me know if this is cool to see, or if you like teases better :).
Interesting challenge I have to actually work in the foreground, mid-ground a bit to get a better sense of depth due to the high level of detail. Seems to be working out, when you do heavy detailed pages which I'm pretty known for doing, be sure to think about the values and color. One of the biggest peeve's I had doing comics full time was when the color artist would run over depth. I'll keep doing little updates as well.